My year 7&8 camp recount about all the fun things I did at camp

This is my first writing in te reo maori I used a table to gather the words I need to use in my writing and a table to put the important information like who what when where and why in my recount writing

He Tuhinga Taki.

EA3 tuhi he tuhinga Taki o tetahi kaupapa

Mahia nga kupu timata rerenga kōrero - He, ko, Ka, I

Mahia nga kupu mahi (verbs)

Mahia nga kupu kare-a roto o te mahi, te purini hoki (your feelings to describe)

Mahia nga kupu wā - inanahi

Mahia nga kupu hou -

Mahia he mahere hei te mahi i nga kupu.

Tuhituhi in each box words you can use in your  recount writing

I nahea? When?	I aha? What?	Ko wai? Who?	I hea? Where?	He aha ai? Why?
Wednesday Raapa	Cook desserts purini tunu	Room 4 students ngā ākonga ruma wha	Intermediate Kura takawaenga	For technology hoki te hangarau

Te Tapanga - Tunu Purini Kei te Hangarau

Kohia nga  kupu hei te awhi i a koutou i tou tuhinga,

Write words in each of the categories to use in your recount writing. Whakamaoritia nga kupu.

Kupu Mahi	Kupu wāmua	Kare-o roto	Kupu Wā	Kupu hou	Kupu Ahua
Stir pororaru	I	Delicious Sweet Reka	Inanahi	purini tunu Hangarau Raapa takawaenga	Lumpy Pukupuku

He Tauira -

i runga i te Wenerei ka haere ahau ki te Kaikohe takawaenga mō te hangarau i hangarau tunua i te purini me te purini tunua i ko banoffee porowhita, aporo akaaiteia me parai apple.I hoki i ki tuhituhi toku whakaaro me toku recipes.Then i i ki te mahi rīhi.

Turkish Baklava and Custard Rolls

Natural disasters

                                              Mount Tarawera Eruption

Mount Tarawera is currently a sleeping volcano situated in the north island in Rotorua.

Mountains or hills typically conical having a crater or vent through which lava,rock fragments,hot vapour and gas are or have been erupted from the earth's crust

The Mount Tarawera eruption lasted six hours and caused massive destruction.several villages were destroyed along with the most famous  silica hot springs known as the Pink and White Terraces. Approximately 120 people, nearly all Māori, lost their lives.Early hours of June 10th 1886 people awoke from their slumber to the sound of lightning,earthquakes and fountains of molten rock.

Cloud of smoke and ash up to 10 km high people as far as blenheim heard the terrifying noise of the mount Tarawera eruption some thought it was a attack by an Russian warship which had recently visited Wellington.A 17-km-long rift split Mount Tarawera and extended as far south as Waimangu. The land was covered with millions of tonnes of ash and remains of rubbish and bodies.lakes were transformed and bushes were flattened.The eruption ended at dawn the ash made the day as dark as night.

The pink and white terraces were destroyed Rotorua’s tourist attraction was destroyed people were killed and badly injured citizens of Rotorua were devastated of what had happened.

     

My Goals Term 4

This is my best time to run around tautoro school

Kia kaha Bullying

My rainbow cake about cross country

Make a copy and name it ‘Analysing my writing T3’ and file in writing. Delete this when you are done.

Week 4  Writing: Cross Country Race

WALT: analyse my writing using the rubrics to assess and score my writing

SUCCESS CRITERIA:

I know I will be successful when I can

• Know what level I will use
• identify the different elements and show what they are in my writing by highlighting these examples
• comment on what I have achieved
• comment on my next learning

Indicators Writing Rubric		My Writing - Cross Country	My thoughts
Ideas	4	Cross Country     As my breathing got heavier I was  feeling light headed.  Only footsteps away from Konrad.  Huffing and puffing  as I got to the hill I struggled to get up every step I took it got harder every breath got heavier  as my throat got dryer as the seconds go past.  Sweat dripped into my eyes stinging with salt.  The struggle was real, I felt the excruciating pain go right through my body. Finally reaching the top then WOOSH I bolted down the hill like a bullet. Then I went through the puddle SPLISH SPLASH keeping my pace with Konrad still footsteps away Adults and kids cheering for us “GO GO GO” I pick up my pace trying my hardest to get  in front of Konrad but his pace is  too quick for me then ZOOM he leaves dust in my eyes.Then my second attempt to run up the hill but it had no faze on me . I passed the finish line 2 laps down 1 more to go I tried my hardest to catch up to Konrad but he sprints ahead of me like a blink of an eye I still carry on not giving up I was on my last lap jogging my fastest. I fly past people like the speed of a cheetah WOOSH I sprint up the hill my fastest then I go ZOOMING down the hill I could already hear children yelling “KONRAD!- KONRAD”!   Then I came around the corner sprinting my hardest and I saw Konrad past the finish line coming in first place then I hear “AREKA! AREKA!” I carried on to the finish line coming in second congratulating Konrad for his win.	Ive put in two ideas and I have elaborated  my ideas
Structure and Language	5		I have elaborated on parts on my writing by showing an dnot telling
Organisation	4		I have organised my writing well and it has good flow
Vocabulary	3		I have only used 1 good word in my but I can use more
Sentence Structure	5		My sentence structure is good it makes my writing flow
Punctuation	5		I have used  plenty of punctuation in my writing
Spelling	4		I have spelt all my words correct in my writing

List 3 things that you think you did well in this text. (not punctuation or capital letters or spelling)

1.my sentence structure

2.structure and language

3.my ideas I used in my writing

What do you need to work on to improve your writing?

How to analyse my writing

Ingredients:

• My Cross Country writing
• A copy of the matrix
• The Read Write tool
• The Writing Rubric
• A copy of the rainbow cake ( to refer to only)
• A reliable person (who knows how to use the rubric) to help and support me

Method:

Turn my thinking cap on to (200 degrees) focus on.  Make a copy of the writing matrix.  Name it and file it in my writing.

When I have finished my writing make a copy and add it to my  matrix under My Writing.

Read through my writing to make sure it is clear in my head.  Click and open the writing rubric in the Indicator box.

With my partner, I read the ideas indicator in level 4 , 5, and 6 and talk with my partner to say whether my writing is a level 4 , 5, or a 6 and why.  I can say ( I think it is this because……..) and I highlight what these may look like in my writing.  I then can copy the indicator into the far right box where it says ideas.  I can decide to use all or those that is relevant to my writing. Check that our thinking cap is still in focus.

I work through all the other indicators with my partner until I have completed all parts of the rainbow cake. CHECK WITH ME!

Add the icing, by writing comments about three things you did well in your writing, what your next learning steps will be

And place your cake on your blog.  DO NOT ADD THIS RECIPE. COPY ONLY THE WALT & THE SC, THE MATRIX AND THE COMMENTS.

My Technology term 3

My Book Review

Book Review The Eighth Wonder Of The World The book was about The pink terrace and a tourism trip in the olden days. The pink terrace looked beautiful then earthquakes rattled the region and then Mount Tarawera erupted. When the villagers saw it the next morning the pink terraces were covered in ash and mud and more than 100 people got killed. People thought the pink and white terraces were gone forever. Then they made an invention to go in the surface of the volcanos and to go into the lake to check the temperature and a scan come up got the scientist thinking the pink and white terraces are still there. I would recommend this book because it has interesting facts that people should know and I really enjoyed it.

My Technology Term 3

My Rugby Experience

The whistle blows its kick off the ball flies into the sky like a bird Kairen read catches the ball like a baby from heaven.A maul is performed the home team wins it the ball is fed out to the backs Daniel carter SMASHES it down the field.The ball is soaring threw the sky like a jet Israel folau catches the ball and bolts it straight up to his opponents then he gets smashed.Players from each team comes flying into the ruck BOOM players getting thumped and smashed.then whoosh Beauden Barrett zooms out of the ruck with the ball commentators shouting “run run” then he goes up the sideline and scores the try for the all blacks the all blacks win against the Aussies. What a phenomenal game what an awesome event to experience Writing Elements Title: My Rugby Experience Name: Areka Bradley How well did I do in my writing?

Come to the gala dinner

Tautoro school pool fundraiser

Becoming a league superstar

This is what I am going to do in the future

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