Kia ora my name is Meesha. I am a year 5 student At Saint Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like the way you added pitchers to your work, but maybe next time you could read back over it and change some of the words to make more sense in your story.
Kia ora my name is Meesha. I am a year 5 student At Saint Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like the way you added pitchers to your work, but maybe next time you could read back over it and change some of the words to make more sense in your story.
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