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Friday, July 8, 2016

My Rugby Experience

The whistle blows its kick off the ball flies into the sky like a bird Kairen read catches the ball like a baby from heaven.A maul is performed the home team wins it the ball is fed out to the backs Daniel carter SMASHES it down the field.The ball is soaring threw the sky like a jet Israel folau catches the ball and bolts it straight up to his opponents then he gets smashed.Players from each team comes flying into the ruck BOOM players getting thumped and smashed.then whoosh Beauden Barrett zooms out of the ruck with the ball commentators shouting “run run” then he goes up the sideline and scores the try for the all blacks the all blacks win against the Aussies. What a phenomenal game what an awesome event to experience Writing Elements Title: My Rugby Experience Name: Areka Bradley How well did I do in my writing?

2 comments:

  1. hi this is Nio from waima school I liked how you talked about the all blacks playing against Australia. and Danial carder smashing the ball down the side line so I hope you can tell us all about rugby again thanks

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  2. hi this is Nio from waima school I liked how you talked about the all blacks playing against Australia. and Danial carder smashing the ball down the side line so I hope you can tell us all about rugby again thanks

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