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Tuesday, June 20, 2017

WALT: recount a past event.



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  1. Plan a series of timed actions
  2. Show my author’s voice
  3. Use language tools - to help describe and tell.

Paragraph 1 - intro
Starting
Paragraph 2- Main events
A game of league- against Hikurangi Stags
Paragraph 3 - Conclusion
What I thought

On a fine scorching hot  Sunday afternoon, we played the Hikurangi Stags, the top team in our competition and it was the Clash of the Titans, the Stags against Tautoro, two top teams. We all knew the winner of this game, will make them the true champs.

Tautoro Titans made the hard yards, we held a hard defence, and then it was time to keep their score as low as possible.. Stopping them in their tracks BOOM! THUMP! SMASH! big hits, left right and centre, then suddenly they scored, my heart is pounding, seeing the tryline is making me worried.

It is getting intense the game is close, all they needed is two points to beat us. But nothing will stop us. They broke through our line. ‘I’ve got to SMASH him!’ I thought,

They spread the ball out wide and they nearly scored, but BOOM! I hit their main main who was about to score. The Stags have numbers out one side and they swung it out BANG! Te Tai holds another Stag up, we are thankful that Te Tai was there.

It's last play the umpire tells us.

We quickly throw the ball out. Whistle blows that's full time YEAH we did it! We won. It was a phenomenal game of rugby league to experience.


We celebrated having a feed at their club. I made sure I had my filled to replenish the energy I lost on the field.

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